Comments on: That Damn Sentence http://ronnmccarrick.com/log/archives/504 My Own Personal Soapbox Fri, 04 Jun 2010 20:16:29 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: doug http://ronnmccarrick.com/log/archives/504/comment-page-1#comment-90 doug Sun, 10 May 2009 01:27:52 +0000 http://ronnmccarrick.com/log/?p=504#comment-90 When you explained the "falls for a woman" part, it seemed clever. I will point out, however, that his "falling from heaven" isn't related to the woman in this story, which might be part of the confusion. I was going to suggest "For a woman, an angel falls and must choose..." but I don't think that works either. So the answer is, Yes. It's unclear. How about something referring to the angel's choice affecting the destiny of each one of the three of them? When you explained the “falls for a woman” part, it seemed clever. I will point out, however, that his “falling from heaven” isn’t related to the woman in this story, which might be part of the confusion. I was going to suggest “For a woman, an angel falls and must choose…” but I don’t think that works either. So the answer is, Yes. It’s unclear.

How about something referring to the angel’s choice affecting the destiny of each one of the three of them?

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